Monday, June 4, 2018

Admission Submission And Denial Comments

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She said, "You are stupid." My admission,
She said, "You are foolish." My submission,
"May be a bad husband."
Denied it holding her hand,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Valsa George 05 June 2018

This admission and submission from the side of both husband and wife is the secret to a lasting and happy marriage.....! This makes an interesting read!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 June 2018

The intricacies of marriage. So funny. Spur of the moment show of tenderness will utterly change the scenario. Great write. Enjoyed reading it.10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 June 2018

'Admission Submission And Denial' is a fabulous little composition! Liked it so much....10

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Rajnish Manga 04 June 2018

After admission in the school of marriage, one is left with nothing but submission and confession. No regrets will be entertained. Nice Limerick. Thanks.

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Gajanan Mishra 04 June 2018

I am regretting all- my confession, great write sir

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