Advice Poem by Nassy Fesharaki

Advice

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Advice

Why not be proud of
-ancestors who came by
-long before I had life?

And why not respect them?

They left me much to learn
-figurative and direct…

Feel proud of them all
-by reading the words on
-the pages of their books,
-on stones, in the caves,
-as well as on the pots;
-painted on; colourful,
-and clay oven-cooked…

They have been great, wise.

Must obey their advice:
- "Surrender to flood
-don't cross the bridge,
-which is built by coward.
-Do not take safety from fox,
-let lion, strong, eat your lungs."

They are my ancestors
-in me runs their blood
-and I keep their pride
-stand tall to fight wrong.

Rights are not given but
-to get them one must fight
-for me and those around
-I shall do what I must.
-Let blood be shed and
-I lose life.

Can use and absorb force
-but never befriend the coward
-and never rest in den of fox-likes.

Sunday, October 28, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: logic
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 28 October 2018

nice advice and logic- They have been great, wise -must obey their advice: - Don't cross bridge made -by those who act coward; -do not safety, made by fox, -let lion eat your lungs… /// written nicely

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Nassy 06 November 2018

Dear Mahtab, you are a great colleague and I apologise for the delay in replying.

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