Afterthought - Inspired By Whole? By Rob Lamberton Poem by Richard Wlodarski

Afterthought - Inspired By Whole? By Rob Lamberton

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If I wallow
And don't swallow
That too big bite
My body hurts
And my mind drifts

Sunday, November 9, 2025
Topic(s) of this poem: free mind
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Thank you, Rob for the inspiration!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Patrick II 15 November 2025

Im going to have to read Robs work for the inspiration, but I have to sat M.J. is right you never do release a word in vain. All you need is a few lines to unleash a thousand thoughts. Another gem, glad to be reading you again!

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Richard Wlodarski 27 November 2025

cont'd: a word in vain is such a high form of praise for me. True to my mentor's wishes, I strive for meaningful succinctness in my poetry.

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Richard Wlodarski 27 November 2025

Kevin, your very positive constructive criticism means a great deal to me. Your one of my favourite poets on this site. You concurring with M.J. about my never releasing

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M.J. Lemon 11 November 2025

Richard! Welcome back. You were so badly missed and this verse marks a triumphant return. Not a single one of your words is ever released in vain...to simply wallow. Such a fantastic verse.

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Richard Wlodarski 14 November 2025

M.J., thanks so very much for having added my poem to your favourites!

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Richard Wlodarski 14 November 2025

M.J., you always make my day! Thanks so much for the welcome back! And for such very kind words and very positive constructive criticism!

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