If I wallow
And don't swallow
That too big bite
My body hurts
And my mind drifts
Richard! Welcome back. You were so badly missed and this verse marks a triumphant return. Not a single one of your words is ever released in vain...to simply wallow. Such a fantastic verse.
M.J., thanks so very much for having added my poem to your favourites!
M.J., you always make my day! Thanks so much for the welcome back! And for such very kind words and very positive constructive criticism!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Im going to have to read Robs work for the inspiration, but I have to sat M.J. is right you never do release a word in vain. All you need is a few lines to unleash a thousand thoughts. Another gem, glad to be reading you again!
cont'd: a word in vain is such a high form of praise for me. True to my mentor's wishes, I strive for meaningful succinctness in my poetry.
Kevin, your very positive constructive criticism means a great deal to me. Your one of my favourite poets on this site. You concurring with M.J. about my never releasing