Again And Again Poem by zaynab el zein

Some things in life are like that, BUT, with GOD all things are possible.

a very nice poem and very close to the real

hahaha it's so gd poem and some time i wish that u still always depresset so u can write gd poems...jk

Zaynab, first of all congratulations, it is very well written.It is simple yet interesting. Second, if you are going to use poetry just to express your depression, you better find so many different ways to do so. Otherwise all of your poems are going to look alike by their themes and by their structure and style. There's no problem in writing under the same atmosphere, under one subject, all you have to do is to find very interesting and different ways and styles to do so. Third, I see that you have a strong confidence in yourself, that's a very good things. Don't lose it ;)

will sunny... i don't know if i should thank u or not after this comment but in life like mine i'll always keep writing poems like this one

I love it, how you embrace negativity this poem show that.

Strongly expressive poetry

nicely done..expressive

Lovely, but you should not always feel blamed, feel hope

a feely write.... and indeed this theme is repeated again and again.....every where.... keep penning cheers