Tuesday, May 26, 2015

Again, She Tells the First Story Comments

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Once, when there was no light, the wind danced with the sea, whose glassy surface became untame funnels and silver crested waves as she leapt and spun. How the wind also spun and let out a mighty roar. You have heard this one before, no? How earth convulsed as if laughing. How seafloor forced her fingertips skyward. How she freed her body from the silent, murky depths.
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Barbara Jane Reyes
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Allotey Abossey 28 May 2015

Paints a very clear picture

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Kelly Kurt 26 May 2015

I enjoyed the phrasing and word choices

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Barbara Jane Reyes

Barbara Jane Reyes

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