Ageless Aurora. Poem by Fay Slimm

Ageless Aurora.

Rating: 5.0


Folds are unfolding, colour rainbowing
Within black velvet fields of midnight sky.
Aurora comes nigh.
Random smooth movement, streams of lowering
Magnetic silk take control, our sighing
As Aurora rides by is eclipsed now
By her billowing dance. Cohorts captured,
She flickers charged veils until dawn, vowing
To outstage the Sun. Then performs rapturous
Solar displays with breathtaking changes.
Aurora flies high.
This luminous beauty beguiles all ages.
Aurora's not shy.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ali Colby 08 April 2009

Very descripted, i felt as if i was watching the aurora. Great poem.

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Herbert Nehrlich2 09 April 2009

Of course, what did I expect? No less than perfection in this intriguing poem. I must admit that I see a kinship here with another writer that I had not noticed before. The grace and care with which the deeper thoughts are presented to the reader is brilliant. Hxx

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Lynda Robson 08 April 2009

Rich and vivid portrayal of the Northern Lights, thank you Fay, 10 Lynda xx

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 08 April 2009

Aurora Borealis, ahh those northern lights delight like your poetry fay... Andy 10

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Sue Sie 08 April 2009

Beautiful portrayal of the Aurora....well done

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Fiona Davidson 08 April 2009

A fabulous natural phenomona described so beautifully by your gentle mind Fay.... wonderful read...thank you...Fi 10++

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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