“I am sad today”
Do not come on the way
Go away and leave me alone
All our sweet days have gone
Why? What is reason for sadness?
I certainly found darkness
She was not in mood at all
I was at odd hours with call
She is kind with nice heart
As all girls have it as an art
Never show their real feelings
Even if you go with face so smiling
i read all her feeling
She was feeling bad for friend
He had problem to be at dead end
No communication since long and no talk
Even though she could go him on bare foot walk
I assured her to bring back smile
To remain sad was not her style
“You are silly” all of sudden she jumped
I was taken back as if rightly roped
She blasted me again “you are silly man”
How can I switch over all of sudden?
I judged her angry mood
My point was not understood
“No, no, I am not angry
But gripped with worry
I am back with same mood
It nice to be always good
I was for all smiles
Let all the friends feel happiness
That is what elders say to follow
We must have only aim to grow
David Coffee1 hour ago I like the flow of the poem however, I am struggling with overall meaning of the poem. At some point it seem as thou two people a male and a femal are communcating and the female is try to comfort the male but the female at some point becomes angry and the male than become concern about the female. Not sure The way the poem starts out capture me but I began to wayne as it progress. I felt a bit lost who was speaking or what was taking place as the poem progressed. Comment 1 Comment+1 IT's ok Darreus Wheeler1 hour ago I fell like the rhyme you were usin
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
BEAUTIFUL VERSE Nick Adegwe-Oshomah58 minutes ago Well composed. Nice work Comment +1 Insightful crystal1 hour ago This has beautiful hidden meanings behind its words. Thank you for your thoughts. Comment +1 very good doreka vaughn1 hour ago **** Comment +1 Consoling a friend