Alive And More Poem by shweta khosla

Alive And More



You’re in the world but not in mine yet.
I don’t know the emotion in your eyes when you look at me.
I don’t know what your ‘hi’ to me sounds like.
Or the smile in your voice when you say, ‘sure’

I can imagine the feel of you but I can’t see.
I don’t know if I will love your eyes or your hair
Or your warm big hand or your smile.
Don’t know, which part of me will you adore?

I don’t know how warm it would be when you hug me
Or how warm your smile would be for me.
Till now, I didn’t need you to survive,
Now I want you, I want to be alive and more.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Siddharth Singh 16 July 2009

initial indifference ending up in helpless desire, good work.

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Ted M 03 July 2009

Highly emotional, the flow of the words built up really well giving way in the end. Nice write.........

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rago rago 03 July 2009

very very fantastic write ........ remarkably written............

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