Friday, July 3, 2009

Alive And More Comments

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You’re in the world but not in mine yet.
I don’t know the emotion in your eyes when you look at me.
I don’t know what your ‘hi’ to me sounds like.
Or the smile in your voice when you say, ‘sure’
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shweta khosla
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Siddharth Singh 16 July 2009

initial indifference ending up in helpless desire, good work.

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Ted M 03 July 2009

Highly emotional, the flow of the words built up really well giving way in the end. Nice write.........

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rago rago 03 July 2009

very very fantastic write ........ remarkably written............

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