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Alive And Subtle

Rating: 5.0

When is that last glimmering ray of sunlight
shining in to illuminate that last corner?
When is that last piece that actually fits right
falling into place, the puzzle-joiner?

When is the last cloud leaving
the sky, so it's calm and blue?
When will that last needle stop weaving
to show a finished dress that's fresh and new?

When is the last dropp going to drip down
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Ivor Hogg 31 May 2008

I think perhaps you have reached that stage. All hat remains is further fine tuning

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Coach Roth 30 April 2008

Fully alive...delicately subtle...you have already arrived long before your time...Coach

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Marci Made 21 August 2007

Brillant and, in answer to your last question, it already has Colette in wondrous progression forward. Be proud young lady.~~~~~~marci.xo. :) ~~

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