This is really messing with me
i really only want to be
there for you when you need me
that i'll do for eternity
the other stuff means less to me
i only wish you could see
what it is we could be
if only we were free
from these lives that have hold
we do everything that we're told
its useless to break free and be bold
it will only come back on us 10 fold
i cant give up and walk away
i promised you i would stay
until you need me no longer
meanwhile it just gets stronger
all these things i feel for you
i know in my heart are true
but there is just so much in the way
its going to one day send me grey
but patience is something i can learn
your trust is something i will earn
when we together i feel like one
and apart it all comes undone
i give up, i have fallin for you
thats something i can't undo
its useless to try and fight
all i can do is try to hide
because for you its easier that
then me always on your back
coz what i feel wont go away
and i dont need you to say
what it is that you feel
because i already know its real
and that we must put aside
what we feel to do whats right
well written hey....i feel like this at times...
hey it's me Rachel! wow, i feel the love, passion, and confusion scream out in this poem! it's pure bliss. i've felt like how you wrote 'from these lives that have hold we do everything that we're told its useless to break free and be bold it will only come back on us 10 fold i cant give up and walk away i promised you i would stay' sometimes it does get worse but in the end you have found someone presious! beautiful poem!
awww :) wow you're such a good poet you might like some of mine, please leave comments on the ones you like! :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
that is beautiful. you ALWAYS write from the heart, and i love it. everything you write captures me and as im reading your work i feel really emotional.