the blood is flowing down my chest
straight from my heart
soon my body will be completely empty
from which i shall depart
i gave all i had to give to you
which you gladly took
iv nothing left for you or anyone
feelings of which i mistook
i'll not regret my feelings for you
to which i freely gave
please remember i loved you
when i'm alone in my grave
your words to me were very cruel
they didnt have to be
you broke my heart that night
cant or wont you see
your words cut into my heart
just like a knife
you said you loved me
but i ruined your life
as i sit here my heart bleeding
not knowing what else to do
please remember
i'll always love you
Great emotional pained poem painted with such sadness that tears at the heart strings of a loveless life. Ya gotta ten fer sadness and great imagery. God bless all poets-MJG.
Sandy I cried when I read this, this is so sad. I could even feel the emotions that flowed from this ebb tide. and is so prefectly written. Thanx for sharing. Barbara
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
this is a very heart felt, well written, touching poem that you wrote sandy.