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All Of My Life

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All of my life

Ruin of youth head cannot see it
Distraction of dream
reason cannot feel it
Life in great mess no one can escape it
Dream today hope tomorrow,
but for whom?
None of us will come at high side

When he was alone
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Like ‘painfully your youth’… Offbeat but true verily and written ably… Voted 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Obinna Eruchie 25 September 2009

The message is important, so many people especially the youths fail to embrace wisdom and waste their lives, and when it is late, they realise by that time, they should live their lives appropriately.

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Marieta Maglas 04 September 2009

It is an abstract and metaphorical poem at the same time. The message of the poem is very clear, because we need this kind of meditation. Saving the soul is not possible at the last minute and if we waste our youth, later is very difficult. This mountain is practically the way to Heaven and it can not be boarded by very quickly. We need patience for this.Wonderful poem, very well written.......10++++++

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 26 October 2008

Hi Jordan its a nice piece.Probably about rebels fighting for the rights of.........seemingly retarded in the middle.

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