Eager to lose
'it'
(my family eager
to preserve
'it')
this
'precious'
virginity
as
if
'it'
were
their possession
(not mine)
as if
'I'
had nothing
to do
with
'it! '
Never seeing me
as I saw myself
the soverign
of my body
oozing with pubesent
lust and sex and yes
the day the fun
fair came
to town
I became
a bottled blonde
and flew free
from shackles
of their wishes
lost in your kisses
as the merry-
-go - round
-spun - 'round
scattering my laughter
in all directions
my virginity
melting like
candyfloss
in the mouth
as your vividily
painted purple porpoise
chased my luridly
scarlet painted dragon
me enjoying
me enjoying you enjoying me
in total abandon
all caution
thrown to
the wind...in my hair
all the fun
of fair.
holds the attention. funny, i thought virginity in the first stanza
Well, now! What a ride! You have shown teen-age desire for freedom, the rebellion of the bottled blond...the wild abandon of the ride...Well done!
ooo la la liked this, great opening lines with the use of 'it' enjoyed the read smiffy
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Great poem Dee Dee! Clever, fun and some very smart usage of the word 'it'! ! Also loved the candy floss line, imagery superb in this one. Well Done you! HG: -) xx