' ' ' ' ' ' ' All The Stars Brilliant Brihtness(Tankas) Poem by Dónall Dempsey

' ' ' ' ' ' ' All The Stars Brilliant Brihtness(Tankas)

Rating: 2.7


ALL THE STAR’S BRILLIANT BRIGHTNESS

The door I opened
with the key of your birth...Death
closes with my grief.

All the star’s brilliant brightness
can’t tame the ghost of my loss.

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MUTE

The words had become
silent...they tried to burrow
into me...borrow
my tongue to pronounce your death.

I would not let them say it.

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CHILD

Your caul now your shroud
ghostly you came to us
in this the birth of your death
born already a ghost you
haunt us here forever. Child.

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WORD LESS

Silence is led to
Language but I can’t make
it speak. It has gone
into itself where no words
ever are...or....ever be.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patti Masterman 25 August 2009

This is unearthly beautiful. Too beautiful for earth, it must have flown in here on some asteroid, from the place where they grow loveliness and give it away to souls for free.

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Fay Slimm 25 August 2009

Hauntingly clear and very moving.... your way with words is legion Donall.....

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Steven S 25 August 2009

This is excellent... excellent.

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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