Almost There2

Rating: 4.0

Frozen shadows,
blinking lights,
lovers laughing,
underneath the
star filled skys.
Hand in hand,
heart on heart,
a toest to us,
and a promise
of a new start.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruby Root 01 August 2006

Hi David, I prefer this poem over the other. This is really nice. I guess I am a little romantic. Excellent poem nice and fun to read. Take care

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Hi David. Your poem is peaceful and calming to me. It has a nice rhythm and rhyme :)

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Linda Preston 18 July 2005

I agree with Mary, a pleasant read. Well done.

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Mary Nagy 13 July 2005

Sounds like a beautiful evening you've described wonderfully with such simple words. Great work (as usual) David. Sincerely, Mary

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allan james saywell 12 July 2005

i like this poem david it makes me think and i dont do that very often because i'm always laughing at myself orgy asm

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