star filled skys.
Hand in hand,
heart on heart,
a toest to us,
and a promise
of a new start.
Hi David. Your poem is peaceful and calming to me. It has a nice rhythm and rhyme :)
I agree with Mary, a pleasant read. Well done.
Sounds like a beautiful evening you've described wonderfully with such simple words. Great work (as usual) David. Sincerely, Mary
i like this poem david it makes me think and i dont do that very often because i'm always laughing at myself orgy asm
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
Hi David, I prefer this poem over the other. This is really nice. I guess I am a little romantic. Excellent poem nice and fun to read. Take care