Lorenzo Cruz

Rookie (4/20/1981 / South Bend, IN)

Alone - Poem by Lorenzo Cruz

I care about you, but the feeling isn't mutual, i look in your eyes, we were once in love, my days are empty, bound under ball and chain, release me from this torture, let me love again. I close my eyes and live in my dreams, the memories we shared. I long for those days, when you cared, when you loved. None of my pleas have an effect on you, leaving me hopeless in a worst state than before. I never knew love can have such an effect, listen to the silent scream in my heart, I open my eyes and silence is sound, only the beat of my heart for you.


Comments about Alone by Lorenzo Cruz

  • (12/12/2008 7:18:00 PM)


    This is an amazing poem. I think many can realte to this. It is beautiful...thank you (Report) Reply

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  • Caroline Guedes (9/14/2008 8:03:00 PM)


    Beautiful poem! I totally relate to this one! Thanks for the comment on my latest as well, I appreciate it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 2, 2008



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