Rose Smith

Rookie (2/8/52 / New York)

Alone - Poem by Rose Smith

There is a place I go deep within my soul;
where no one else can find me
Whenever I need to be.
It is there I stay but for a little while;
with fond memories of a time gone by.
If only I had cherished those precious moments I was given
When all appeared whole and right within my home;
I wouldn’t have to feel quite so alone.

Comments about Alone by Rose Smith

  • (8/27/2008 6:33:00 PM)

    Poems should be short. They should also say something that everyone uinderstands instinctively. This does both. Well done.

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  • (4/11/2008 1:21:00 AM)

    ouch! touched a nerve or two
    regards Smiffy
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  • (4/11/2008 12:48:00 AM)

    Short, yet conveys a meaning that could be expressed in novel. Well done! (Report) Reply

  • (4/11/2008 12:03:00 AM)

    we all have that spot. very personal and well put. regret is difficult. thank you. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 10, 2008

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