shruti modi

Rookie (31-01-1990 / kolkata)

Alone - Poem by shruti modi

In the crowd, I stand alone
Noticeable but unnoticed,
Loveable but unloved,
Caring but uncared.

Certain lines cannot be changed,
People walking together, move ahead..
Find new companions, friends.

Alone do I stand,
With everybody, but without anyone for me
I am lost..fearing, shivering.
Loved ones find new ones to love;
Alone do I live, so will I die,
But cant find anybody for a laughing, joyous journey till the end.

Isolated, over self egoist and sacred
In secured, yes! ?
Where are the friends may I ask, who leave me behind and go
Find new ones and forget the old..

Life I still smile disguising my sadness;
Find me a friend, who understands,
Help my heart which doesn’t trust, trust someone
Wait till believe and make the journey …


Comments about Alone by shruti modi

  • (2/22/2010 10:22:00 AM)


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    Very well Described, I can connect my self with it as I feel the same. Between the people but still all alone….So Alone! ! !
    ____________________________________________________Harsh___________
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  • C. P. Sharma (4/30/2009 2:14:00 AM)


    Eloquent loneliness. Arnold says,
    'We mortal millions live alone.'
    As for love, trust begets trust, distrust leads nowhere. When there is trust, there is no questioning.
    CP
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  • (1/30/2009 6:34:00 AM)


    A fine description of your solitude. The urge to get rid of this has been put in compact but meaningful words.........10/10
    Best Wishes
    Sameer
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  • premji premji (11/3/2008 2:06:00 AM)


    none can be a poet
    unless hurt by love...
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  • (9/15/2008 2:17:00 AM)


    A very calm yet intense poem. thanks (Report) Reply

  • (9/4/2008 9:49:00 AM)


    You're no longer alone, im here 4 u im your friend the 1 u were looking 4 your lover (Report) Reply

  • (9/4/2008 4:43:00 AM)


    only the poet can derive the plesaure from pain
    the feelings woven give a self solace
    that nothing else can give

    but shruti...m sure u don't get stuck in this
    best wishes!
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  • (8/13/2008 11:39:00 AM)


    very heartfelt, i can relate, very well expressed and nice to read thankyou. kel (Report) Reply

  • (8/13/2008 11:34:00 AM)


    I really enjoyed reading this poem.
    And I know how you must feel.. I've been through something like this.
    Great Poem.

    ~Trysta
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  • (8/5/2008 11:18:00 AM)


    I`m Luca Tony from Italy and i read some of your poems and it seams very nice i just want to have alittle shat that`s all and specially allone what about you! ! ? (Report) Reply

  • (8/5/2008 11:16:00 AM)


    oh my god.this is really poetry in its most delightful form, i love it. (Report) Reply

  • (7/30/2008 3:24:00 PM)


    Very simple and straight words to express in a powerful way this universal feeling. Very encouraging, keep on good work! (Report) Reply

  • (7/30/2008 3:21:00 PM)


    I know exactly how you feel - excellently written (Report) Reply

  • (7/28/2008 11:15:00 AM)


    I enjoy this poem, it shows what happens as you grow older. While in high school clicks begin to form, and you lose friends that you thought would always be with you. (Report) Reply

  • (7/15/2008 12:34:00 PM)


    Again, another outstanding poem Shruti.
    Another 10 for you!
    Great job,
    Linda
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  • (7/9/2008 9:25:00 AM)


    its so sad. i loved reading it but it just broke my heart. great job though. im sorry you feel this way. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 24, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 9, 2008


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