Please Don'T Give Up On Me!

Rating: 5.0
(Very, Very short poem?) : D
Please Don’t Give Up On Me!
You came right out and said it.
“I Love you damnit! ”
You started crying,
As I lie here dying.

I can barely see,
As I draw my last breath,
You said, “Please Don’t Give Up On Me! ! ”
Friday, July 3, 2009
Dani Moore 09 August 2009
sweet and sad all at once great job
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Broken Heart 22 July 2009
short but sweet! ! loved it 10+ again hope u hve time to read my poems too...
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Keith Hendrickson 21 July 2009
i say it a lot but its true, short and sweet does it sometimes. and you 4sure did it in this one. another great piece.
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i won't... leslie. i liked saying that.
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