In the dark
I cant see anything
No noises
No movements
I wonder
Where I am
I take
Steps into the darkness
My footsteps
Make no noises
I reach out
Trying to feel
For something
But no contact is made
With my fingers
In this darkness
I am alone
This is very good because it made me think. If you can't see it how do u know it's there? The same goes for darkness, if u can't see anything how do u know where ur at? Very good job
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nice work, while in the darkness we closed our eyes deeply there would be opened another world, thanks 10+