Alone Poem by Kelsea Osterman

Alone

Rating: 4.2


I walk a path that has no end.
It seems to go on and on.
Never comes to an end
and has no light.
It is dark and cold.
It is scary and I'm all alone.
I have to walk this path
wondering why I do it.
Why am I here and
where am I?
I walk this path with an
empty mind now.
Nothing to think about.
Nothing to do.
I wish to find the light.
Just a little light would be nice.
But here I am still wandering
these halls that have no end.
still no one here, and still all
alone.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Leslie Philibert 30 March 2013

Good write, well presented

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Titi Dale 30 March 2013

There is a point in everyone's life where they see only darkness. And I for one can relate to that, for it is so true :) thanks for sharing the poetic thoughts of yours: -D Titi

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Joshua Fegley 16 February 2013

I feel alone. I can relate to this.

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Sossi Khachadourian 30 March 2012

very good, full of emotion, thank you for sharing with my best wishes of success :)

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Melissa Bange 30 March 2012

This is so touching, really great. Thank you for sharing, keep up the good work!

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Chinedu Dike 30 March 2015

I see depression rearing its ugly head as life hits lowest ebb. In such deplorable situations, it behoves one to steadfastly hold on to Faith because Faith keeps those that keep the Faith. A lovely poem, well articulated and nicely penned from the heart. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Roseann Shawiak 18 March 2015

Always wondering why we are walking down a particular path, darkness all around us. Our journeys are not ended until we walk into the infinite light being touched by the divine. A truly expressive poem offering inspiration and hope to others, yet still remaining alone. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Dean Bottomley 01 April 2014

The poem is well formed and worded. If it is an expression of the authors’ feelings then it is perfect, but if it is an attempt to put into words the loneliness of others it might benefit from a lift or hint of something better to come? Or maybe I am just trying to be optimistic after coming out of a black period myself? ? ? ?

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Jasbir Chatterjee 30 March 2014

this is a good read and the title poem of the day is well-deserved...Sometimes one must enjoy one's own company and listen to one's inner voice, for that is the voice of God...

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Hardik Vaidya 30 March 2013

Kelsea Osterman, I have slightly different view, when walks a individual path one is normally alone, and one walks to journey, a journey to a destination, a destination which is light it self, therefore being in the dark is a reminder that the journey is yet not over.

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