clawdea benat

Veteran Poet - 1,089 Points (philippines)

Alone And Careless - Poem by clawdea benat

In a day, another pace to face
but in that its empty inside
no power, just evil
but God is merciful
i was striving alone
but actually keep leaning onto God
i was lonely, saddened with my emotion,
pitiful in everything
im growing up but my life don't move at all
though i am blessed with this spirit give`th
and im thankful for God`s love and his showers upon me
another day i am always worrying
but i don't need to
Cause Jesus is reminding me of his promised
and his caring to me
so, i love thee high who created me
i didn't grow up living by myself
i was with my family
but i feel broken and different
i always thought ``i am nothing``
though God is with me
and think that this is no sense at all
but Jesus makes sense to me
but i don't want to be cared or be loved by someone
but GOD scolded me, spank my butt
and he give`th me LOVE
but there came Hate
and God take care of it

Poet's Notes about The Poem

God works through out. i feel him. cause i believe in him. with all my life and soul.i feel his power and anger. if you too believe him. believe in his power and his anger. then everything will be okay. just ask and he give. accept Our Lord whole heart.

Comments about Alone And Careless by clawdea benat

  • Aries Profanisaurus (10/10/2014 8:35:00 PM)

    This poem shows promise, but will need a little bit of work to make it better. I will message you some suggestions on how best to do this. (Report) Reply

    Claudge Ben-at (10/14/2015 1:32:00 AM)

    you don't need to, i thought this is perfectly created.-

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 2, 2013

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