Writing this words brings smile to my heart
Before i meet you i was alone but willing
I my wildest dream you would
take me in when it was chilling
Let us take a stroll on the side
Have a picnic and enjoy the ride
You would be there when i felt to cry
No present is needed as long as you be
Comforting, loving and kind to me
Let time make it happen
In return i would have the pleasure
Of being your wife
Forever
hes not yers sorry not get a life.! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
this is very touching keep it up ur poems are much better than mine! take care..
Darling, you are too young to be thinking about being a wife: but, it is a lovely poem but make sure you proof read, okey? Lots of room for improvement. I love it just the same.
Nicely written Emmajoy ' KRISTA
not bad really nice could use a spell check think i dunno though
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
glad to hear the young speak of being a wife.. just for that I applaud you.. good job!