Laura Rodriguez


Alone (Part 2) - Poem by Laura Rodriguez

The never ending ocean of sadness is here,
it caught me when I was off guard.
I feel like crying,
I never want to stop crying.
My chest is thight,
I can't feel my heartbeat.
What have you done to me?
I only feel pain in my chest.
There's no one here to protect me.
I'm alone.
No one around me.
No one wants me.
No one loves me.
I'm alone.
Everyone leaves me
forgotten, abonded,
stranded, alone.
No one remembers me...
I'm alone


Comments about Alone (Part 2) by Laura Rodriguez

  • Darren Woods (12/31/2009 2:31:00 PM)


    I feel the sorrow of this poet.
    what else can I say?
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  • The Jesus Of Suburbia Is A Lie (12/27/2009 11:47:00 AM)


    Heavy duty poem...
    Read my poem...ALL ALONE....!
    And i'm sure u will write alone(part 3) after reading it...lol
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  • Meggie Gultiano (12/25/2009 6:24:00 PM)


    a very touching write..... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 25, 2009



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