The Past Poem by Laura Rodriguez

The Past

Rating: 5.0


Funny thing,
the past is.
When you look back,
all you thought was hard seems easy now.
Things were simpler back then,
easy, less complicated.
The past,
something I wish could happen,
over and over and over again.
The future is scary,
the past is comfort.
I wish I could stay in the pain,
the past,
forever and ever.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 27 December 2009

Wow, Laura, what a beautiful poem, heart touching, great talent you have shown here, keep it up, this poem sound like one of mine titled 'WHEN LOVE IS GONE' 'A LOVE'S DESIRE' and many others I have written inspired by the PAST...10++++

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 27 December 2009

but we still have to move on. The past is gone but the future is long. as a poet, you write good. you express your poems expressively, of course. nice one!

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