Am I Doing Enough? Poem by Ashley Horstman

Am I Doing Enough?



I held you when you were born
I carried you when you cried
I gave you your first bath
I watch you sleep
I see you look around
I wonder what you think of this world
I try to make you happy
But i wonder if I am doing enough

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ron Flowers 18 January 2009

Because you are asking, I suspect you are. Good poem, Ashley. Ron

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Pamela Lutwyche 05 October 2008

You can only do what you can do. I’m sure you are doing what you can. You can only go by what you feel is the correct thing to do. Shows you care.

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Dhruv Gaba 04 October 2008

few words bt really heartfelt

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Linda Weischedel 04 October 2008

You are doing plenty! Others may not do 1/4 of what you have done. Good job on this write.

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Ashley Horstman

Ashley Horstman

New York City, New York
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