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Among Tall Pine Trees

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Out among the tall pine trees,
with a view that could spill
over if it wasn’t so profoundly
controlled by the dark ditches,
the swallows searching cry
and The eternal Will,
I’m trying to come to terms
with the fact that it’s over.
Too soon, far too soon,
just like flour through a sieve,

tap, tap, tap go the years…
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Ernestine Northover 29 April 2006

I like your style Sean, expressed very eloquently, and great content. Good read. Love Ernestine XXX

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Dan Tharp 11 March 2006

For a 19 year old, your poetry has substance. Good job. dan

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Amberlee Carter 10 June 2005

' I sit, writing poetry of a faceless sky and thinking of the trees: our season in this walk is not unlike theirs; we spend so much time in a twilight daze, praying for a warmth we can grow towards' Forgive me for quoting myself, I just wanted to show you how well I can relate to this poem. Your work is growing quite nicely..this piece has a strudy foundation..it's fine read my friend...

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Ivy Christou 10 June 2005

Seán this poem is awesome.. I could follow the flow of your thoughts as if they were mine. The ending you chose is also amazing and powerful and doesn't let the reader down.. well done! HBH

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