An Acid To Burn Away The Pain........? Poem by iron panda 23

An Acid To Burn Away The Pain........?

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When life hands you lemons
should you really make lemonade?
I say go out, throw all those bad lemons
away....

Take the juice, pour it
into the evilest of eyes...
No? not their eyes?
well then maybe over those
terrible lies?

Let the acid burn them all away
let the pain sink into their souls
within our souls?
Let the hatred burn away
fade away
into the darkness

A darkness like no other
should it all disappear...
will it spark a new life?
A new and improved way
to try and tare us all apart?
eat away at whats of importance
within us....what should be there? .....
Love?

~IP23

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
fleur de lys 25 May 2010

Great title, striking imagery!

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Crimson Haze 10 April 2010

I really like this poem. And I agree with putting the lemon in there eyes... lol but thats just me.

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Thomas Coltrin 07 April 2010

everything is a state of mind....including love......

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