Afzal Juneja

Freshman - 830 Points (18/12/1994 / Mumbai)

An Adorable Flame - Poem by Afzal Juneja

I see you in my dreams,
I see you in my book,
Ohh my,
I can feel you, in every single look.
.
The day we first met,
Since then, your thoughts are ruthlessly riding my head,
And I know, I am in mess,
But, i feels so great.
Is it insane?
Or is it mundane?
Because theres something burning inside my heart,
And it's wildly reflecting on my brain.
God, this feeling is really hard to explain,
But I call it as,
An adorable flame.
.
.
-A.Juneja.

Topic(s) of this poem: insanity, lonely, love

Form: Anaphora


Comments about An Adorable Flame by Afzal Juneja

  • Rajnish Manga (7/3/2017 11:39:00 PM)


    An adorable poem with an exquisite expression of a lover's passion. Thanks for sharing.
    The day we first met,
    Since then, your thoughts are ruthlessly riding my head,
    .......Because theres something burning inside my heart,
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  • Dr.tony Brahmin (7/2/2017 6:33:00 AM)


    I see you in my dreams,
    I see you in my book,
    Ohh my,
    I can feel you, in every single look.
    theres something burning inside my heart,
    adorable flame.
    These are the points i collected from your beautiful poem. Thank you for your thoughts, imaginations
    A very good poem. Thank you dear poet.. tony
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    Afzal Juneja Afzal Juneja (7/3/2017 2:41:00 AM)

    Thanks DR

  • Souren Mondal (11/19/2015 1:41:00 PM)


    Yes Afzal.. Love can be really intense.. Thanks for sharing.. (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/19/2015 1:08:00 PM)


    Nice poem on love...I liked it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 19, 2015

Poem Edited: Monday, November 23, 2015


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