Wednesday, March 21, 2007

An Almost Goodbye Comments

Rating: 5.0

Frosty fingers intertwine
elaborate lace, peering eyes
and what is this I feel inside?
what darkness is amiss?
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Lesley Taylor
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Raynette Eitel 22 March 2007

This is really lovely, Lesley. It is musical and its imagery is haunting. Raynette

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Danny Reynolds 21 March 2007

Very nice Lesley, great flow and structure. Danny

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Lesley Taylor

Lesley Taylor

Santa Maria, California
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