Fay Slimm

Rookie - 102 Points (Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

An Ambiguous Haiku - Poem by Fay Slimm

Satisfaction, tho' brief
Gives relief, wholly
To mind, body and soul.

Comments about An Ambiguous Haiku by Fay Slimm

  • (12/3/2008 3:35:00 AM)

    Yes, this is so true but can be very brief, very well put. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.

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  • (11/28/2008 7:36:00 PM)

    The brevity of satisfaction and the brevity of Haiku are an apt fit. Neither linger very long except in our memories (Report) Reply

  • (11/28/2008 7:10:00 AM)

    So true Fay, so very true.. Andy 10 (Report) Reply

  • (11/28/2008 6:07:00 AM)

    Short but full of meaning, satisfaction does give relief,
    Lynda xx
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  • (11/28/2008 5:37:00 AM)

    Very ambiguous, sustained satisfaction is the Everest for us all 10+++ Chris (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 28, 2008

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