An Ambiguous Haiku Poem by Fay Slimm

An Ambiguous Haiku

Rating: 5.0


Satisfaction, tho' brief
Gives relief, wholly
To mind, body and soul.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Scott Austin 03 December 2008

Yes, this is so true but can be very brief, very well put. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Scott

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Robert Howard 28 November 2008

The brevity of satisfaction and the brevity of Haiku are an apt fit. Neither linger very long except in our memories

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 28 November 2008

So true Fay, so very true.. Andy 10

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Lynda Robson 28 November 2008

Short but full of meaning, satisfaction does give relief, 10 Lynda xx

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Kris Smith 28 November 2008

Very ambiguous, sustained satisfaction is the Everest for us all 10+++ Chris

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