A tale of two weddings
wonderfully writ,
weddings have so many
secret tales to tell,
the tale of love unrequited
not reciprocated,
is a bitter low blow to groin
to grievous heart,
to watch another happily marry
long soul sought lover,
is nail driven into coffin bound heart
wedding couple merrily,
depart on romantic honeymoon for two
one left unloved can only rue,
hand of fate remorse grown dark of late
feelings grown blooming blue.
Copyright © Terence George Craddock
it's like a stormy moment... you write like a classical poet here, like Shakespeare and the others... great!
One winner and one loser. The loser is left with the pain, while the happy wedded couple ride off into the sunset. An experience that usually happens to most people at sometime or another. A good write. Lynn
As Princess Diana said ' There were three of us in this marriage' Sometimes one of the contestents loses... Great poem... colin J...
Fantastic style to write on love.... That has really made me think for a moment about what I am experiencing these days... Thanks a lot for your pen...
The tragic winners and losers in the the game of love with wedding bells to heavens or hells and the poem opens up a can of worms that in reality are so real and sad++++10 regards
I really liked this poem. Read it a few times just to see if it read the same way. Nice poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i like this peom it is good