An Ode To My Love Poem by Amar Agarwala

An Ode To My Love

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Those fiery skies hued red and grey
And birds in silence say,
Do hark to that stillness cool
A thunder-squall's on way.

Leaves and blossoms their heads hung low
Deferentially bow,
Pleading with winds to tell the clouds
It ought fulfill its vow.

Gathering murk and falling dusk
Lightening with thunder brusque,
The wild wind spraying soothing drops
With sweet fragrance of musk.

Drenching boughs and my pained soul too
That had since long been blue,
With memories of our romance
And love I shared with you.

Come dance with me in falling rain
That it may ease our pain,
Back in time you had loved me so
Come love me once again.

Let time pause on a sharp incline
Enduring sweet as wine,
When in my arms you'll whisper soft -
That you were always mine.

Shall sink into your hazel eyes
Our lips entwined in sighs,
My frenzied passion fusing with
Raindrops upon your thighs.

Your bosom melting in my chest
Dark mane a lovers' nest,
Your soft contours tempting me
At Venus's behest.

Where art thou lost my sweetheart love
Come spread your treasure-trove,
Tarry not for the rain-clouds flee
To far heavens above.

An Ode To My Love
Tuesday, March 29, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
RAIN-SONG

Did you ever got wet in the rain... with someone you love? Have you ever missed someone you deeply care for in falling rain? Have you nursed painful memories of a sweetheart when dark clouds have burst forth with haunting raindrops and the fragrance of the earth teased you with lost moments?

If any of the answers are in the affirmative, you will then comprehend the meaning of the verses below. If not, never mind, it will prepare you for the future. Though I hope that you face not such moments... but then in deep pain is a palpable beauty that is indescribable. As a wayward poet I have tried to express that and I feel unsatisfied, for I know well - that the
deepest feelings can never be described.

Now don't ask me, if I too faced such in my life. My verses reflect upon my thoughts, and I know you are wise enough to decipher the truth.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Loke Kok Yee 30 March 2016

at my age I'm past all that but your poem did made my heart flicker awhile thanks Amar

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Amar Agarwala 30 March 2016

Dear Loke, Thank you for reading my poem. Glad it evoked feelings within. Best Regards.

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Rajnish Manga 30 March 2016

Your notes are as sweet and discerning as your poetic portrayal of nature's moods on a rainy day. And that, too, treated from the lover's point of view. Enjoyed reading it. Thank you, Amar.

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Amar Agarwala 30 March 2016

Dear Rajnish, Only a poet knows and understands another. Your words carry deep thoughts, feelings and I look forwards to your comments. Thank you is to small to say - grateful that you take time out to read my verses. Warm Regards!

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Tapan M. Saren 29 March 2016

Expressed very well....

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