Monday, January 5, 2015

An Old Beard Man Comments

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At times, I snooze to believe that you really do exist,
I realize I cannot choose when you shrilly insist,
But no wait …Old man, you confuse,
At this instant, I lose,
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Melisa Peter
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Kim Barney 28 January 2015

Death is not an old beard man but a butterfly! As proof, just read my poem BUTTERFLY OF DEATH. Well written. Keep writing.

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Fabrizio Frosini 05 January 2015

it has got a nice musicality: a lovely 'song'..

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