Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 389,843 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

An Open Insult - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Why can’t we care for human relation?
Why do we run for awards and citations?
None of it can give us full guarantee and honor
We will be known as strangers as creation of our own

We openly cry upon meeting the failure
We can’t go all out support and assure
We are uncertain and not fully sure
How can we go to roots of the problems and cure?

We react strongly to the human values
We still don’t find the reason and clues
How can we be in position to give their dues?
Have we failed ourselves to be honest and true?

It is time for self judgment and introspection
We can’t divide it into zones and sections
It has to be taken as single entity and not fractions
We can only prove ourselves by strong actions

We celebrate with fun fare out flying success
We disregard personal wishes and deny the access
We demonstrate to world to the tune of excess
How can we adopt double standard o with nexus

It is always give and take formula
Take but don’t give is only lacuna
Confine to self interest and commit fraudulently
How can we boost our image so loudly?

Are we denigrating our selves and cheating conscience?
Is there no proper chemistry even in science?
What are we trying to achieve and thriving for
What have we to do or offer what is not in our store?

Well, it is not difficult to come clean and profess
It is greatness of man if it is agreed to confess
It will help to come out with open mind
New dimension with relation can become easy to find

Human mind even subsoncienly can read and act
Inwardly it can accept the reason with facts
It is temperamental for anybody to raise and react
How best you can retain the onslaught is fine tact


Let us not underestimate the capability of others
They may offer correctly which sometimes may bother
It is how the balance is maintained with dignity
Life is not worth to live in if it looses continuity

We can’t raise the empires on the ruins
No pride can be restored by minting gold coins
Its credibility will be restored when accepted in exchange
It won’t be then very difficult to sustain and manage

Let us build the very fine human core
This issue has emerged many times this before
We have come out every time with solution
We only lack fine blend and strong resolution


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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 2, 2010



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