Erotic rewrite of David Cook's Avalanche
I feel alive inside you
And all at once when you moan and move like that againest me
I know for sure that no matter what they say you are all mine again
We pound into each other
Your sensual atmosphere is pulling me ever deeper in
And without any rush
You take me harder into you and my doubts are forever hushed
Take me down
Roll me onto the bed
In your arms
Ooh boy I can't honestly remember ever feeling this good or this hard
Make love to me and tell me tonight
Into your moist desire I will bend
Beggin' on my knees to know
Do you like me being your sugar daddie's little whore?
Do you like it when down there deep I bury my head
Crashing down, crashing down
In this anal avalanche
In this anal avalance
Its nights like these baby that remind us
The more they try to make us change, the more we'll work to stay the same
Swept up in this forbidden emotion
We're make it through
No matter the mistakes we make
No matter where this love is led
Together
Even on the edge
We will stand as one
Take me down
Roll me onto the bed
In your arms
Ooh boy I can't honestly remember ever feeling this good or this hard
Make love to me and tell me tonight
Into your moist desire I will bend
Beggin' on my knees to know
Do you like me being your sugar daddie's little whore?
Do you like it when down there deep I bury my head
Crashing down, crashing down
In this anal avalanche
In this anal avalance
Take me down
Roll me onto the bed
In your arms
Ooh boy I can't honestly remember ever feeling this good or this hard
Make love to me and tell me tonight
Into your moist desire I will bend
Beggin' on my knees to know
Do you like me being your sugar daddie's little whore?
Do you like it when down there deep I bury my head
Take me down
Roll me onto the bed
In your arms
Ooh boy I can't honestly remember ever feeling this good or this hard
Make love to me and tell me tonight
Into your moist desire I will bend
Beggin' on my knees to know
Do you like me being your sugar daddie's little whore?
Do you like it when down there deep I bury my head
Crashing down, crashing down
I feel alive inside you
And all at once when you moan and move like that againest me
I know for sure that no matter what they say you are all mine again
We pound into each other
Your sensual atmosphere is pulling me ever deeper in
And without any rush
You take me harder into you and my doubts are forever hushed
2009 Ramona Thompson
wow very amusing i must say it can really give someone an orgy but i loved it.....it kind of reminds me of the books i read. moast of them are urban and erotica tales so i like this a lot and a 10 goes a long way with me
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Hello Ramona, well you've really let it rip in this one, and obviously excited Elena and I like its outspoken scatology but it isn't an acrostic, otherwise, excellent