Analysing The Apple Poem by Denise Hart

Analysing The Apple

Rating: 4.5


I ran inside, I grabbed the apple
I started the car ….
I ran him over

My heart kept beating,
It was rapid, it was thumping
It was manic

I had to face it quickly
No time for fear to hide
Behind what I had done

His big brown eyes
Staring at me with compassion
His insight of what was to come
Was entwined in mine

The apple had only a nibble
Not even a full bite
I rang for help
A farmer came by

In the car he lay
A long drive there
To the vet
My sobs were heard

His heart faded
Our big black boy
Our faithful friend
Who loved his apples
Had come to his end

Monday, August 28, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: death of a friend
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bill Cantrell 28 August 2017

I love the blues and I love your poem, very creative in meter and imagination, really good! ! !

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