Waking Up To Ashton Poem by Denise Hart

Waking Up To Ashton

Rating: 5.0


I hadn't noticed your great strength or your inner beauty
As you stood there while I looked out of the window
Changing as the season took you from light to dark
As the leaves fell away from your limbs
And the buds started to appear, dark and soft

I awakened in the Winter, while you were still asleep
Studying you in the early morning for many weeks
Like a lover awakening to her soul mate
You came alive as I nestled into your trunk
Photographing you from afar and naming you
A masculine name was fitting for such a king

Ashton, you became my companion
While I studied you intently
Watching as you attracted birds and bees
Looking through your eyes at your surroundings
Listening to the symphonies of chirping and bleating
And other country sounds whistling around you
Reverberating through your trunk

As we grew together I connected with your energy
Entwining in your peace and wisdom
Feeling your new growth as it burst through the buds
Alive and green, buzzing with bees
You've grown me as you did your buds
Stirring my soul with eagerness and learning
Not just an Ash, my Ash, Ashton the Great.

Waking Up To Ashton
Tuesday, August 22, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: awakening
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 18 November 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Denise. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

0 0 Reply
Jette Blackstone 18 November 2017

I just read a poem about falling in love with poetry...and now a poem about falling in love with a tree. I could relate to both! Thanks for sharing.

0 0 Reply
Denise Hart 19 November 2017

Thanks Jette appreciate you reading my poem

0 0
Rod Mendieta 22 August 2017

Wonderfully written, with a sensitivity that I can relate to. There's a mighy oak I watch every single day on my way to work that makes me feel in the presence of an old friend. I've no problem owning up to the fact that admiration grew to repect and respect to love. Thanks for the feeling your poem inspired in me.

0 0 Reply
Denise Hart 23 August 2017

Thanks Rod I appreciate your kind comments and insights and your own similiar experiences with the mighty oak.

0 0
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success