Anarchy Rules Us(Tanka) Poem by narayana aghalaya
Anarchy Rules Us(Tanka)
Anarchy Rules Us(Tanka)
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north, east, west or south
brewing turmoil all around
cooks and.spoilt broth
troubled waters, no fish found
sadly, none.knows how peace sounds
devil, our partner
Stockholm Syndrome, in nutshell
hopelessly cornered
brainwashed by many Goebbels
can't sift out heaven from hell
anarchy rules us
there is puerile happiness
while we make no fuss
most systems are in a mess
it is better we speak less
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5/10/2024 10:40:20 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Dear Poet A tanka consists of 5 lines and 31 syllables. Each line has a set number of syllables see below: Line 1 – 5 syllables Line 2 – 7 syllables Line 3 – 5 syllables Line 4 – 7 syllables Line 5 – 7 syllables but Your line- brewing turmoil all round (6 syllables) we make no fuss (4 syllables) sorry for comment
dear poet, Thanks for comment. Indeed there were 2 syllables less, as you have pointed out. I have now made corrections as below: brewing turmoil all around while we make no fuss I appreciate your comments. thanks and regards narayana aghalaya
dear poet, Thanks for your comment. The errors are due to oversight! I have modified the lines as below: brewing turmoil all around ; while we make no fuss. Thanks once again!