Anatomy Of Pain Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Anatomy Of Pain

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An arrow hits to hurt, felt by brain,
And feelings are then felt of some pain.
Rage, revenge when follow
Oh like one more arrow,
Suffering is then gained in bargain.
Soon enough goes the hurt,
Pain once gone won't revert,
But nurtured, suffering does remain.
Flesh forgets pretty soon,
To forgive be thine boon.
If only you let in cooling rain.
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Reflections | 07.09.16 |

Monday, April 1, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: forget,pain,rain,remember
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The flesh forgets soon enough, not the mind.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 April 2019

What a wonderful poem imbued with so much wisdom. Yes, there will be a cycle of pains and suffeeings if we nurture our hurt and pain. Liked the wonderful closure.line.10++++++++++

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Aniruddha Pathak 03 April 2019

Thank you Rose Marie for spotting this poem and for your comments.

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Aniruddha Pathak

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Godhra - Gujarat
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