Monday, April 16, 2007

And A Rock Feels No Pain, And An Island Never Cries Comments

Rating: 3.0

There's a birds nest outside my window,
a bright white ribbon woven into it.
The tail of the ribbon is dancing in the barely present wind.
The scene takes place in a barren tree,
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Seth Proch
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Goldy Locks 16 April 2007

good/solid structure, description. Agree with Kelly. Very contemporary. And cool, did i mention cool? sjg

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Kelly Allen Vinal 16 April 2007

Great imagry - well done, contemporary piece!

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Seth Proch

Seth Proch

Bennington, VT
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