And The Doors Swing Open... Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

And The Doors Swing Open...

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HE SAID THAT sex WAS
LIKE A HAND SHAKE, filled
with voodoo, and broken
glass, and a book for all
his dirty thoughts.
HE said that sex is like
a used condom, you put it
on, then take it off.
THEN the doors swing open,
and he falls in love.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruby Root 21 September 2006

Well David, I hope it's not. I plan to fall in love and I think you have to try and not think of it that way. That is terrible. I don't want to have to think it is that way either. Excellent write. Take care.

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Duncan Wyllie 28 January 2006

Dear David This is very clever.You have used uncomman angle for this one. Love Duncan

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