And Yet I Die Poem by Angee Reynolds
And Yet I Die
I see the stars sparkling so bright,
Within the moon kissed sky.
I hear the lark so sweetly sing,
Amidst the morning dawn.
I smell the flower full in bloom,
And see their royal pomp.
And yet some place so deep within,
I'm shrouded and I'm closed.
The brilliance there I can't see,
In mists of misery.
Enshrined inside, unable thus,
To touch the warmth without.
I gaze upon this passion spent,
And yet... Inside I die.
very good composition. Lovely use of words to express emotions. Enjoyed it alot
Lovely poem. The choice of words was so precise and just...wow excellent lol 20/10 -Tyease
a flowers bloom will always fade when captured and contained in a vase for vanity. nice poem.
Oh, here's a sad poem that stirs my heart...I can exactly feel the exceeding depression from ur words. The one in ur poem is struggling against the enchanting atmosphere around her...No more thing can make her heart smile, it's really inconsoliable: ( Anyway, thank you for your great poem, it's amazing!
Simply excellant. Keep on writing and share with us.You have poetic talent.
This is a pretty good write. It was short and very clear in meaning. I thought the ending was a little weak. But overall, it was nice. GW62
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 5:33:59 AM # 1.0.0.1119
too sad u did great.