And...You Said Poem by Dagmara Anna AuraDagimar

And...You Said

Rating: 5.0


so ordinarily you said
brush your hair into the crown

or dissolve it long to the wind
and in the green dress

dance barefoot in a clearing washed
with fresh cold dew

look how yellow marsh marigolds
are smiling to you

we breathed that day
sweet aroma of green

and now, a day is long at least still,
but not had flowers there,

as then, let us wait, new will
bloom only for us even in our dreams

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Koray Kubus 14 April 2009

;) you wrote good things as like everytime....ı lı ke ı t...

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Joseph Poewhit 14 April 2009

Has a very beautiful word flow.

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Barry A. Lanier 14 April 2009

The evocativeness of this penning in the simplicity of the beauty and just down home cute assembly of her words...'so ordinarily you said' and 'dance barefoot in a clearing washed with cold dew'....and on and on...just up close and personal cute.....

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 14 April 2009

so pure so true so lovely... u are AMAZING

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