christy rich

Angel To Soon

She was so lonely.she was so scared. she always sat by herself

because nobody else cared. her father left her, her mother ignored her

if she even talked she'd be banned to the corner. she was so small

she was only seven but she often wondered what it'd be like in heaven

but she never said a word just silently cried thinking of the night her

granmother died. she was thinking of life when she knew someone

loved her now all she has is her unloving mother. one night the girl felt

very brave she asked to watch t.v and promised to behave but her

mother was drunk and very mad. she hit the girl with all she had. she hit

the girl again and again untill she knew it was the end. the end of the

girls life which was lived so horribly when the police showed up her

mother plead 'i'm sorry'. sorry didn't help the little girls life but atleast

she gets to see what heaven is like.

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 2, 2008
Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 1, 2009

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Comments about Angel To Soon by christy rich

  • Eyan Desir (1/6/2010 6:24:00 PM)

    Awwww sad poem

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  • Christopher Is Dead (but I'm More Than Alive) (12/17/2009 8:42:00 PM)

    That legit brought tears to my eyes. That is such an awfully sad poem, and an just an awful experience. But it was a great read. It flowed nicely. Nice job.

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  • Heather HillHeather Hill (1/6/2008 9:02:00 PM)

    Aww that was sad but really good! !

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