Suicidal Lies Poem by christy rich

Suicidal Lies

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Cross my heart wish to die why not my lifes just one big lie. I live in the

darkness because i'm afraid of the light i cry myself to sleep at night.

All the voices inside my head telling me i'm better off dead.

I finally listen i know they're right...i make a plan i'll do it tonight. I go to

my room. I try and wait. It's finally time i's really late. I take my razor to

my vien i feel the sharp, intense pain. I look down as the blood starts to

pour i wonder how long it will take as i fall to the floor. It's finally time i

close my eyes it's all over no more lies.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Well you wrote this poem, so I guess it wasn't the end. Thank God. I really feel the intensity, the unsteadiness, the pain in your poem. It really is quite good. But, more importantly, I could really feel it. I can tell your pain was real, and I'm really sorry about whatever drove you to that pain. I can relate with what you wrote, and I can understand depression. It's a main inspiration for my own writing. I don't know when you wrote this, but I hope things are better for you now.

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Silence Dogood 07 September 2008

deep and dark but a great poem keep it up!

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Heather Hill 06 January 2008

this is good..keep it up

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Suicide King 02 January 2008

Very good piece of poetry, but I don't think it should be Suicidal Lies, but in fact Suicidal Truth...don't be afraid. Keep writing -suicide

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