Sunday, May 6, 2007

Another Day Comments

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When you awake, you ponder as you lay.
What will you do with another day?
Will you sit around and say it is boring?
Is there a reason for your spirit to be soaring?
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Theresa Ann Moore
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Rajaram Ramachandran 11 May 2007

What a sound advice to one and all. I find, you are a powerful writer and are able to convince the readers on any subject you write.

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Just-another- Poet 06 May 2007

great poem - but 3rd stanza first 2 lines that read: It is a planned decision that is plain and clear. The look on your face will be reflected in the mirror. these 2 lines need to follow the rhyme of aabb aabb aabb aabb aabb you have aabb aabb acbb

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Theresa Ann Moore

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