Another Day In Blue Poem by Arwen Lee CW

Another Day In Blue

Rating: 2.9


Night is falling

Time slips away slowly

Again I am falling

You are the only one I see

I try to catch

the light beam outside

but I could only feel

the dark shadow of you

silence remains

cold is still

It's empty without you

another day in blue

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 20 February 2009

'I try to catch the light beam outside but I could only feel the dark shadow of you'... catchy lines in this touching write...bring out well the sorrow and disappointment inside the mind...10

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Ridge Cahill 19 November 2008

The title is awesome. Although the poem is sad and the poet somewhat desperate, it has such a wonderful romantic grace to it. Simply excellent.

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 22 September 2008

very sad..melodious...romantic...piece.

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Arwen Lee CW

Arwen Lee CW

Kuantan, Malaysia
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