Arwen Lee CW

Another Day In Blue

Night is falling

Time slips away slowly

Again I am falling

You are the only one I see

I try to catch

the light beam outside

but I could only feel

the dark shadow of you

silence remains

cold is still

It's empty without you

another day in blue

Poem Submitted: Monday, September 22, 2008

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Comments about Another Day In Blue by Arwen Lee CW

  • Kesav EaswaranKesav Easwaran (2/20/2009 4:15:00 AM)

    'I try to catch
    the light beam outside
    but I could only feel
    the dark shadow of you'...
    catchy lines in this touching write...bring out well the sorrow and disappointment inside the mind...10

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  • Ridge Cahill (11/19/2008 5:13:00 AM)

    The title is awesome. Although the poem is sad and the poet somewhat desperate, it has such a wonderful romantic grace to it. Simply excellent.

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  • Dr.Wardha Jawdat (9/22/2008 12:18:00 PM)

    very sad..melodious...romantic...piece.

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