Leslie Alexis

Rookie - 217 Points (111111111 / Grenada)

Another Me - Poem by Leslie Alexis

My heart tears
Even as my eyes bleed
...........you
With another
My soul cannot bear
Even as my body
You cannot see,
Or maybe, just maybe
He became me:
My life was transferred -
My eyes and hands given to him.
He touches you, the way
I used to:
His touch - My touch!
He kisses you, the way
I used to:
His kiss - My kiss!
Even as melancholy
destines that I feel your touch
and your kiss,
Reality
Perturbs the senses
And all I feel
Is sorrow,
For I know
my tomorrow
is spent without you,
My sky is no longer blue.
I call the blackest clouds
that brings rain to my soul's eyes
To become a storm.
I needs the rain and wind
To wash
The memories of you
Away.

Copyright © 2008 Leslie Alexis


Comments about Another Me by Leslie Alexis

  • (5/18/2010 12:22:00 AM)


    ‘He became me: ’…indeed to be cherished…

    ‘Reality /Perturbs the senses…’ …it is virtual not reality…

    Nice metaphors…

    Voted 10
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
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  • (5/2/2010 5:31:00 PM)


    ok, , , wait..i really like the way this is presented..a different style of showing'' two in one''...a very nice idea and a very catching thought... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 30, 2010

Poem Edited: Monday, January 23, 2012


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